要点：1、简要陈述这一现象 2、分析这种现象的负面影响 3、你的建议
Dear Editor, With the college entrance examination around the corner,many parents promised their children that they would get money or a trip or whatever they want only if they study hard.As far as the parents are concerned,promising may encourage their children to take great pains to get good grades and go to a well-known university.But every coin has two sides,it can also encourage them to do something wrong to get the good grades,for example,cheating.
In my view,this method has effect on kids,but,whether the effect is positive or negative depends on kids themselves.My suggestion is that don't give your children any reward unless they succeed in the college entrance examination.In a nutshell,he who laughs last laughs best.
Since the College Entrance Examinations are approaching, more and more Senior Three students find themselves under great pressure now. Some find it difficult to fall asleep, some have a poor appetite, and others are afraid of exams. As a result, Effective Ways to Release the Stress has become a heated issue. Here are several ways I think effective to release the stress.
First of all, we must bear in mind that stress is really natural and we needn’t worry about it at all. In fact, proper stress may stimulate our brain efficiency and we will perform better under proper stress.
Secondly, if we cannot conquer the fear of stress, just shift our attention to other aspects, such as listening to music. As for myself, I often listen to light music when I feel stressed, and I always find myself refreshed and relaxed during the process. Besides, doing sports can have the same effect as well.
Last but not least, we can turn to our parents and teachers for help. Keep in mind that they are not only the adults we depend on but also our reliable friends. If I talk to them, I will feel I am not a single person and supported both physically and mentally by them.
As far as I am concerned, the key to releasing the stress is that we should keep a steady mood and trust ourselves to be surely successful!
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